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Tragic Beauty by ~Babay-Shawdow:iconBabay-Shawdow:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open


I gave myself willingly
Knowing you'd get me anyway
I should have never given up
I should have run away

But I couldn't resists your eyes
Your voice of black velet rose
Even your smell still lingers around
I resist the urge to make me go

Back to you is the last place
I'd want to be right now
But I still can forget you
Not this second, anyhow

I still have the scars
From my last escape
But I'm here all the same
My hands bound by tape

The bruises nearly faded
For new ones to appear
I hate you so much
But love you my dear

Toture me as you will
I still belive your good
Though you cant help what you are
I just wish you could

Stop all this violence
Stop all this pain
Stop all this crying
Try to save the day

Even though what you put me through
Has been absolute hell.
I'm happy you're enjoying yourself
At leat from what i can tell

When you punch me you smile
I grimmace but smile too
I'd be happy doing anything
As long as I'm with you

Though it may be unhealthy
I know that is true
I can't help but love such a man
As beautifully tragic as you
©2009 ~Babay-Shawdow
:iconbabay-shawdow:

Author's Comments

DOMESTIC VIOLENCE wooT

no not wooT

TooW YEAH.

This sucks but i liked it in a weird way

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~Yayume Jul 13, 2009, 8:05:50 PM
Wow, the emotions come through with every word I read.

Sad topic, but great job!

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"But if you don't write of things deep inside your own heart, What's the use of churning out so many words?" ~Ryokan
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~Babay-Shawdow Jul 13, 2009, 8:06:57 PM
Oh, thank you. Yes. it is sad, but its easy to right about it already has an emotion behind it.

Thank you again.

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"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.
(quoted by ~kyia6)
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~Pimpin00000000 Jul 13, 2009, 8:32:38 PM
This is awesome, i find it almost impossible to understand how you get in these mindsets, you write as if you have experienced these things first hand(i mean unless you have...have you?) Its just beautiful writing, beautifully tragic...
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~Babay-Shawdow Jul 13, 2009, 8:34:38 PM
hurr Hurr. XD mind sets lol. I havent no. And dont plan on it for that matter.. Well thankies sillay.

XD

I love how i jsut wrote that sad thingy and now im all hyper XDDD

--
"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.
(quoted by ~kyia6)
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~Pimpin00000000 Jul 13, 2009, 8:40:19 PM
Heh heh, yes mind sets. good, don't. It really is awesome though.

Yeah, your weird...I love it!
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~Babay-Shawdow Jul 13, 2009, 8:42:52 PM
XD. Promise haha. Aw.

>=3 XD YOU BETTAH LOVE IT. or else i mean the whole flirting thing just wouldnt work if you didnt.

--
"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.
(quoted by ~kyia6)
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~butterflies-in-fall Jul 13, 2009, 8:46:31 PM
this is awesomely sad :3 its tragic but awesome im happy <3333

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You there in that hat! No, not you! You! Yes, you! Hi! :3
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~Babay-Shawdow Jul 13, 2009, 8:47:41 PM
XD Thank you?
<3333334

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"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.
(quoted by ~kyia6)
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~EnduringPoet Jul 13, 2009, 8:48:11 PM
Creative. Powerful. Emotional. Awesome.=D:hug:
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